Angel of Death

Clo >> *hugs* Thanks for your lovely review. I agree with you on the blond mane thing, it is horribly cliche and bland. I know I can come up with ...

Attention! I might be writing another part to this using the same character. It's just to work on character development and such, since I can't seem to write anything. So ...

Wow, thanks! I was just getting worried that this was never going to get reviewed. I was really hoping that Terry's character was okay in this chapter because the more ...

To me, it's still as good as the first time I read it. Really, I only ever nitpick on a poem when it needs it and this does not need ...

Hello again, Sunny!! “They told me I needed singly lessons. A bar manager told me I needed singing lessons.” I sigh again. “I’m a failure.” singly = singing I think ...

'Ello Hannah! Ooh I quite like this. It's dark and very spooky. It sent shivers down my spine as I was reading. I really really liked it. Ah, I really ...

Sanareth Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I was waiting for a critique for this, and I was thinking that it would get ripped apart but I'm glad to see ...

MilaScribbler Thanks for your critique. I'll surely take your suggestion into consideration but I like the way it is formatted, but we shall see. Ha, I wasn't sure anybody would ...

Oreorulez21401 Thanks a lot for your review. I wasn't sure it would be good because usually when I write something off the top of my head, it is not really ...

Yay! I was so happy to read this. Okay this was a lot better than before but there are still some things I would like to point out: The clouds ...

Attention! I'm starting this back up and I did some changes recently, so I need a lot of feedback. All critiques are welcomed and appreciated. Thanks, ~Angel

Attention! I'm starting this back up and I did some changes recently, so I need a lot of feedback. All critiques are welcomed and appreciated. Thanks, ~Angel

Attention! I'm starting this back up and I did some changes recently, so I need a lot of feedback. All critiques are welcomed and appreciated. Thanks, ~Angel

Wow, when you edit you really edit! This was way better than the first draft and your character is twice as good as she was the last time. Everything flowed ...

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Awe, Kirsten, you're so sweet. You really made me cry with this critique and I'm so glad you liked it. Yay, I was hoping ...